by David Wallace Feb 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Those soft beautiful hazel eyes tells no lies, |
"eyes tells no lies" |
Omg i love it....thats how i feel about my gf..way to go hun... |
by LiL Ma
Thanks for the comment on mi poem |
I think that you need to work on your rhyming scheme. It ain't so hott. But other wise this was a very sweet poem.....i liked it. |