Quite interesting mix of archaic language and a very contemporary situation.

A well written and very funny poem, typical men, lol, 5/5

Hiya Kate,

You have a great poetical mind. Reading this poem made that very clear as it seemlessly flowed from one line to the next. Many of the poems on here seem to have too many words per line.
Thank you for making me smile this morning.

Michael 5/5

Very funny and so true. I suppose the female equivalent would be "Shoe sale ended yesterday" ? lol.