Twisted Passion

by Finalgravedigger   Feb 29, 2008


Twisted Passion by
FInalgravedigger and Cursedlies

Within your presence I fall
short of breath
feeling so weak as though
close to death.

Felt so strong before you
No fear dwelt within
Now all i know is pain and suffering
Memories of where we've been

Losing contact with all surroundings
Listening to my hearts consistent pounding.
Stuck in a time for a freezing moment
Feels like a century of blissful torment.

They say love completes and saves all
All i can remember is a torturous fall
Lying on the ground, screaming your name
Now that you here, I'll never be the same.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Israfel

    Wonderful! Once again, a beautiful poem. I was really able to relate well to this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    A wonderful collab. Each line has its own unique flow that never strays too far from the last, with a wonderful back-and-forth feel to it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    OH MY GOSH, this is AWESOME!! i love it, its really flows and goes right to the heart 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great work love the emotion and the flow keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow.. just the name alone caught my attention, but the actual poem itself.. beautiful, amazing! I totally fell in love with it. Great job, Andrew. You are such a talented writer, and I'm sorry I haven't commented on your stuff lately. You know I love your work =) Keep it up! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

    (Btw.. I have a new poem out as well. Because of You.)

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