Wow this is quite a story and poem. its very sad and im sorry for that. how can something so beautiful be hurt so bad? its ok you make it through these things seem temporary but there are good times we tend to forget them though but don't worry. keep writing

Awwww.sweetie..that was so gooooood...I cant begin to tell you, but i'll try when I talk to you...for now, it only rates a...5/5...lol....xoxoxo

This is absolutely beautiful and sad. beautifully sad. ur the sad angel? :(

i think this deserves a 5/5.

"and she'll shatter and fall
because to gain
you must lose it all"

^sad, yet optimistic. u've got talent :)

Anyone that can write like this automatically is blessed with beauty and grace. Its an unexplainable feeling i got when i read this. My heart started pounding and i felt attached to this 'angel' in some sort of way. It was special.

- Katie - SilenceInDecember

This one is really great...
the way that you write, how the story is telled...amazing!!

Hey thanks for commenting my poem, this is a great poem, good job!

desi

Omg really a perfect example of pure poetry! It's really tragic! Great job!

Wow you have some talent gurl! thats was sad and beautiful at the same time. now that is poetry.

and she'll shatter and fall
because to gain
you must lose it all
~that was my favorite part. the way you write is beautiful so keep up the good work. i'd give it a ten if it was possible!

Ok so like i can relate to parts of this

and her wings were broken
a long time ago
and still she is choking
on all the things she didn't do

I feel like this all the time i feel like the things i hold back choke me to the point i gotta cry

GREAT JOB