Omg.....tihs story if fxckin crazy!!!!!!!!!! its so sad............really good though

This is a really good poem/story
very powerful and i've said this before but i'll say it again
you are an amazing writer =)
x

OMG!!!!
I'm starting to cry!!!
Amazing Job!!!!

Aw, this poem is so sad. it touched my heart! =( but i would like to tell you that when you're in a pickle in life...try praying to god he does help when people are in need,

but if you don't believe or that is against your religion then i must apologize. but overall about this poem. i love it. 5/5

I like your poem, amazing write. Keep up the good work, lovely!!!!

Awww that was so sad i loved it...

Wow!! that story was really strong. some guy in my area actually did something like this to his wife but he later took his life during the police standoff.

Omg,this is really touching and sad poem...I love it...
Great job!

Wow this was amazing. very detailed. sad but a great read. i loved this form of writing you chose, very creative. you should think about writing books perhaps? and the title to this poem was perfect. all and all this was a wonderful write. keep up the great work! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Amazing and so sad but true that crap like that seems to be so common in the world today great work powerful story

Wow did u write this....the brought kind of a tear to my eye

Wasn't much of a poem but i really liked it 5/5

It's very stong