Beauty

by StandStill   Feb 29, 2008


How i wish and pray
i could be
the person
that you see in me

she sounds lovely
my dear
i do not live up to that, simply
i fear

and what you see
i am not sure
because in me
there is nothing that pure

but you are beautiful
in your heart
and you are wonderful
your love hits me like a dart

so stop and think
about you
because in your reasoning there is one kink
you do not see the beauty in everything you do

mike.....for you. butterfly kisses and bear hugz

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Wow... the flow was flawless i have never seen a flow like this in p&q ever, this was probably the best flow ive read in a while.. the best of all.. literally.. i love it simple words but read so swiftly..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sounds like you have a very good friend there. Friends are our greatest gifts from God. Treasure your friendship. I know your friend will lve this poem you wrote.
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    Wow, what a great poem of yours. It's so sweet, i love the way it sounds. Keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by dancing in the dark

    This is really good.
    I loved it.
    Thanks for the comment.
    Keep writing because you have some real talent.

    -Rose.

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    That was so sweet. i loved it :)

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