Solitude

Aw!..this was like so sad....sorry ur lonely....
i love your word usage on this, it makes this poem very powerful.
good job!
Aly

Simple,but deep, liked it

Simple,but deep, liked it

The bathroom facet drips like a clock running back-wards
A single toothbrush hangs alone.

^^ Oh My God !!! These lines are so wonderful..Jus simple words were used but really touched my heart...What a deep beautiful description of you being alone...

Arctic solitude swallowing like suffocating Frost
and spits me out in disgust

^^ Great choice of words...I Like how you manage to put ur emotions in words...simple words but painted a thousand meaning..

And my days now I've no longer be in the Arctic solitude I now have someone, something to hold on.

^^ Yeah its true, once youve been down that road before, you will never feel alone somehow...

This piece is absolutely stunning...Made up of simple words yet pictured genuine feelings and ive noticed you write stuff stright from your heart..

You are an excellent writer...Good Job and Keep it up..

Another really beautiful piece. Keep writing, you're so wonderuly expressive. 5/5