Comments : Pierced

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Wow! thsi poem was deep!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    A very wonderful piece of work, truely inspiring to thoughs who need it, deep and sincire, amazing poem--tara

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is a thought provoking piece. It conveys faith, hope and love and was beautifully penned. Even for the not so religious readers, it is still apiece worth reading. Nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Sherry, I love this piece! I love reading poems that really capture the essence of God's wonderful word, and will for us. This poem conveys a great heart of faith, and confidence towards God and his amazing son, Christ Jesus. (: Strong cadence, descriptive words, and blatant truth.

    One thing confused me though, the last line of the fifth stanza, "Satin's" ... forgive me if I am wrong but I have not seen that spelling before, should it be `Satan's` instead?

    Anyhow, I really enjoyed reading this piece, and look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing.

    Keep writing down the bones!
    xoxo, `Novalyn