Message of this piece is truly deep and absolutely true, I agree with your topic and I wrote a one or two poems with the same topic. Anyway I will be totally honest with you, I don't like repetition of some words too much(like when your) but the message of this poem is still amazing. I like pieces with more metaphors but still this one is truly good, and I enjoyed in every line.

A beautiful poem with a message we all need to learn and hold close in our hearts! Thank you for sharing this with us SARA :)
5/5

The Gift you write of is the most treasured gift of all. So many people learn this to late to enjoy what they have.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Amazing poem its a moving poem to read and the truth in the words comes with heart.. could i ask i would be honoured if you would read mine to give me your thoughts on what you think