Whoo, I don't think I have to strength to do another comment in detail after that last one. Haha, it drained me, but I'll do my best.

Aww, sweetie! You're blaming yourself for what happened with you and some guy, aren't you? Don't do that, because really it's so not worth it. There is someone way better out there for you, and you should be out there looking for him instead of crying over this guy who was stupid enough to hurt you.

I want to work things out
To be like it was before
I want to say I love you
And you to say you love me more
^^I love the last line! It's so so so true! Everyone does that with their boy/girlfriend. Haha, it made me smile, even though this is a sad poem.

I think the flow, again, was off a bit, but not really bad. It was a good poem! ^.^

Keep writing!
Cayce

Kristina.

5/5.

this was a wonderful poem.

im so jealous of u.

lol.

ilysm.

much love,

mackenzie.<3 [the lil sis.]