OUCH!!!

by Independence Forever   Feb 29, 2008


On the first date i thought it went well
it ended as the ringing of a church bell

it seemed forever and future dates looked assured
but maybe it was just me, my senses were allured

the letter said it all, turned aside like a doll
i was speechless, my mind seemed to stall

all i could say was ouch as i read the paper
funny how words can be an emotion shaper

now we go on our separate ways
when we meet are the worst days

she'll say hi like nothing happened at all
i hate that, it makes me ache and bawl

maybe it's nothing, that letter, the date, life
or maybe it's jabbing at my heart like a knife

maybe if i had more to offer i wouldn't have this letter
or maybe living the loner will just protect me better

i wish i never asked for a second date
oh well, I guess in the end it was fate

Forever The Loner
David

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  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Just remember Gods will b4 Davids so when God is ready itll be there and some1 once said that if God takes something out of ur life He'll always give u something better..... u never know but nice write Great as usaul and nice pic i did happen to see that on ur profile.
    5/5 always
    ur fav.
    Kate~