Comments : Afterlife

  • 16 years ago

    by No SmIl3 iS mOr3 b3aUtIfUl ThN tH3 1 tHt StRuGgL3S tHrU t3aRs

    Thts a great poem, like it 5/5. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry, but short, simple poems like these bore me, although I did like the first line, though it exists already with Snow Patrol's 'Set the fire to the third bar'. Just so's you know.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    This one is really good miss elf, dont listen to Bradly, this one is just short and sweet. Wonderful :D 5/5!!!

    CourtneyxHolland