by Melissa Sara DeMaio Feb 29, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Dear Elizabeth, |
by Amber
I hate when things like that happen. It really and truly hurts. It like they cut out a big piece of you(well it is for me anyways). |
This poem is meaningful and deep. It could use a little work as far as rhythm goes, but the other factors were amazing. I really like it, I think you write beautifully. |