by Lizaveta Feb 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The past, the love, the memories. |
by Nikki
Wow, this was good. |
I really enjoyed the repetative "the" verse it was nice. but over all i think again the flow could be worked on. |
Awww. That's so pretty and sweet. Yet touching and sad. Nice Read. Great Write. 5/5 |
by noha
Nice work i rely love the way you write it and the part when you say:Time has passed, leaves have fallen, |
Another great write... The flow was good, the word choice was great, and I loved the concept. Very beautiful poem! 5/5 |