Comments : A reason for my broken wings

  • 16 years ago

    by Eman D

    I like the repitition and the rhyme scheme. The content hits too. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Oh I love this. :-) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by barbara

    Wow this poem is also amazing! i love the way you had that steady repetition of was you. im sorry that someone made you feel this way but congrats on capturing it.

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow...this poem is sooo sad and beautiful...it made me tear up a bit. iloved it. GREAT job!!! its so sad and very emotional.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Love the poem.
    repetition went well.
    and ending was gr8.

    well done

    xx

  • The last stanza was amazing!It totally tied the whole entire poem together.The beginning threw me off a bit but that's no biggie.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was decent. It wasn't astonishing... could've been more... creative. But it wasn't a bad write. The flow was good and the way it was written was decent as well.