Interesting form, I quit liked it though, great job, keep it up,
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Amber.. wow, I'm so glad that I put you on my favorites authors list already, because if I hadn't.. you'd definitely be on there now! This poem was just soo amazing, I loved every single line. You have such a wonderful talent, please don't stop writing! Great job, keep it up.. I look forward to reading more amazing pieces from you! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Hey great words u used in this poem to explain urself. very touching powerful. great structure also. xx