Thinking of you under the stars

by kylexthexmagnificent   Feb 29, 2008


I look above to the heavens,
watch the stars shine down on me,
wishing you were here,
its such a pretty site to see.

i dream of you here,
with your hand in mine,
staring up above,
watching your eyes shine.

i smile at that thought,
wishing it would come true,
i hope a star flies by,
so i can wish for you.

all alone i stand here,
thinking only of you,
missnig your cute laugh,
and the way you sing too.

i stare up at the stars,
the bright ones show your face,
i connect them all,
it takes me to a special place.

i see your smile in the stars,
i smile wishing you were here,
we would enjoy this moment together,
we would have nothing to fear.

a tear falls softly from my cheek,
i see a bright flash go by,
i wish upon the star,
i see it fly so high.

i wish for you to smile,
so the stars would smile too,
i stare at the twinkling stars,
thinking of only you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Hey it is very sweet but sorry in this poem nothing blew me away, it seems a bit common.. maybe it's just me being too critical but i put 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Aww..omg its so sad..i cried like for real...this touched me so much...tears filled my eyes so fast....you have an amazing heart and if someone wants to h urt you and lie or something why do you want to be with them...right?I loved this and only want the best for you in llife...find some one that honestly makes you complete,some one who makes you smile,some one who instently takes your breath away,some one that is mentaly and physicaly ready for a relationship,some one who will not have there friends get in the way of both of yours love....this was so cute and amazingly well writen..!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Aww kyle, that was so beautiful and sweet. I am sorry that you miss the one you loved. I watch the stars go by and wonder if anyone will tell me they love with their arms around me and look into my eyes. "By this very moment, this will the thing we will do. treasure our memories under the stars. And remember when we are apart, when i see the stars, ill think of you." but this poem make sme feel this. I love it though, you just write so good...thank you for painting so many pictures in my head with smiles,sighs and tears.

    CourtneyxHolland

    <3

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