The mistakes i made

by Steven   Mar 1, 2008


The first mistake i made
you gave me your screen name during class
the second mistake i made
you started to talk to for the first time online
the third mistake i made
you were working with me on your history project
the fourth mistake i made
you were starting to miss me
the fifth mistake i made
you were calling me for the first time on your phone
the six mistake i made
you were asking me how smart i was
the seventh mistake i made
you were telling me to get a haircut, in order to go to a dance
the eighth mistake i made
you hugged me on your birthday, when i gave you a box filled with candy
the ninth mistake i made
you were with me at my new apartment, talking alone with me
the tenth mistake i made
you were telling me about him, and i was out of the picture
the last i mistake i made
you were in love, but not to me

sorry...

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  • 16 years ago

    by ilu

    Great Job!!!! I love this poem ...
    keep it up,,

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Npot sure if it was intentional but u went from third to fifth and maybe in the last part you could say but not with me instead of but not to me
    i rly like the structure of it tho and its a gud poem
    keep it up =)