That was very very beautiful GREAT job 5/5

Excellent job
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5/5 this poem is very good

What no castle in the middle of a flamming volcano? No kiss to set you free? yeah your right that's lame.......lol. great poem. 5/5

Really reallt good i lovee it it is wonderfull great job

Yee great job ... amazing poem ... modern cinderlla .. i hope somday you will find your "prince" good luck

Ey, nice poem, its heaps different and you word things together nicely :] 5/5