Dear Mr. RazorBlade

by Silent Screams   Mar 1, 2008


Oh Mr. RazorBlade, With Begging Eyes I Plead.
Kiss My Wrists Slowly, The Pain, Let It Recede.
Through Tearful Wrists And Blood Stained Eyes,
Show Me The Truth, And Hide Those Lies.

Oh, Mr. RazorBlade, Give Me Your Sweet Kiss.
Because That Is The Pleasure, I Have Truly Missed.
With Every Single Touch Of Your Lips, The Pain Goes Away
With Every Bloody Line, Another Heart Is Lead The Right Way

Oh, Mr. RazorBlade, Carve Into Me Your Love, Please.
Take Away All my Cries, The Things I Forever Grieve.
With Shaky Hands Upon Your Very Body, Held Tight
I'm Begging You, Make Me Bleed With All Your Might.

Dear Mr. RazorBlade, Please Come Dance With Me,
Please Help Me Make Them Understand And See.
This Is My Only Addiction, My Lust, No Greed,
Give Me More Kisses, Make My Wrists Bleed.

Dear Mr. RazorBlade, Today Will Be our Last.
For I Cannot Forget, This Tormenting Past.
Let Us Dance Away All Of Our Frights.
Let Us Be Together, Our Last Night.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Trying to let go of reality

    This is an amazingly sad poem. It's portraied wonderfully though. Sad as hell but really good. lol =P My sister cuts herself and it's a little hard for me to understand, but thank u for this poem. Little by little hopefully I'll understand. =) Thank you =) Actaully I think you may know my sister. On here her name used to be "Bloody Razor Tells It All" Something like that. But she made a new account. So if u want to get in touch with her or something just pm me ok. But thanks again. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    This is such a beautiful inyet sad poem. I love it. So deep and heart wrenching. I understand and I can relate. I thought that this was amazing. Please continue 2 write 4 all of us fans out here. 5/5

  • The flow and rhyming of this poem was great but, all the capitalizations through me off.It makes it seem childish and hard to read.Only the beginning of sentences should be capitalized.Still,the emotion and origonal thinking to this poem was good.

    -Amber

  • Omg this poem is so amazin i can so relate to this, keep up the good work. 5/5 x