I liked it you just have to fix your secound word to stand...lol..i loved this poem it was soo good...and true no one cares what is happening to the earth,,it is our home..and will remain our home till something happends...you put your mind to something and it gets done..but i think you should chose another name for it..a more catchier one..you know wat i mean?...
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Her breasts now are sagging garbage piles. I have found some words of nature and I agree it would be nice to see the sky again. Keep the faith, it could get better.

I liked the poem but i didnt agree w/ the haze part. u must live in a big city or somthing cause the stars are great from this end.