Waves

by sneha   Mar 1, 2008


From the deep and
Into the sky,
Their kingdom arise!
They roll,they ripple,they fly!
With the Shore calling "come nigh"!
Their ego heaves a sigh.
Filling the air with their cries,
For broken are all their ties!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Lines are good. A good write. Personally I liked it. Keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Excellent poem..... All d lines r perfect in their own way..

    marvellous.. keep it up..

    best wishz...karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I don't know why exactly, but I didn't like it. I think it all just seemed like a big ball on mess. They were just words, to be honest.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    I really liked this. There is a very subtle spiritual feel to it. Good job.

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