I really liked this. There is a very subtle spiritual feel to it. Good job.

I don't know why exactly, but I didn't like it. I think it all just seemed like a big ball on mess. They were just words, to be honest.

Brad

Excellent poem..... All d lines r perfect in their own way..

marvellous.. keep it up..

best wishz...karan

Lines are good. A good write. Personally I liked it. Keep writing.