Cool :)

I really like the way you word your poems, great language!

You seem to go with the medevil style of poetry, most tend to go more moderen but no the less this poem is awesome, your quite talented

I would have to say, you do have a different way of writting.... i like it though! i like how descriptive you are with everything " little" thing. keep it up!! 5/5 always
Kate~