This peson must have hurt you bad but dont that turn you sour because there is allways someone else that will cach you.

Wow. well there certainly was alot of emotion, which is a huge part of poetry for me. There wasn't a real structure to this piece, to me it seemed more of a venting session where structure and flow and stuff wasn't thought about. Which is cool, cos we all do that. Life sucks sometimes but it will always get better, don't forget that...

Alyssa. x

I love it. i know how you felt i liked : YOU SAID YOU LIKED ME AND TOLD ME YOU LOVED ME
thats what my ex would always say to me. 5/5 amazing work.