Look ahead

by CHANGED   Mar 1, 2008


Though everyone thinks life is a game
once you change it will never be the same
so for those out there who don't wont to try
if you don't believe, you wont fly
those who do negative,don't be lead
but just know look ahead

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Right, this is good advice of thinking of life

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Yeh i repeat what others said, this poem is not just really positive, but it also cheers people up, it's really nicely done, and though it's short, it's very meaningfull. wonderful job. keep it up
    btw thanks for the coment
    5/5 from me for this great piece of work.
    take care :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CHANGED

    THANKS FOR THE COMMENT PLEASE RATE

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    I love how this is so different, like most poems are all so sad..and about how bad life is, but this is very like .. encouraging. my favorite part is: "if you don't believe, you wont fly" well just wanted to tell you that this is great! (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Hello again i like this poem because i like that it is one of the more positive ones that i hav read...i no from experiance that u should never hold onto the past u should always go for the future if u always hold onto the bad things in the past, u wont move on or ull end up like me...5/5 :)

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