Hello again i like this poem because i like that it is one of the more positive ones that i hav read...i no from experiance that u should never hold onto the past u should always go for the future if u always hold onto the bad things in the past, u wont move on or ull end up like me...5/5 :)

I love how this is so different, like most poems are all so sad..and about how bad life is, but this is very like .. encouraging. my favorite part is: "if you don't believe, you wont fly" well just wanted to tell you that this is great! (:

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Yeh i repeat what others said, this poem is not just really positive, but it also cheers people up, it's really nicely done, and though it's short, it's very meaningfull. wonderful job. keep it up
btw thanks for the coment
5/5 from me for this great piece of work.
take care :)

Right, this is good advice of thinking of life