Who doesn't know about this. It was more than sad, it was horrific. Destroying human lives for selfish reasons, not entirely too different from today's world, but still back then it was at a peak. Anyway, I love how you spread your message in this piece. It hit heart and spread feeling and truth. 5/5

Deep and profound. You described the horrible scene with great detail and it brought everythnig to life. The flow was rocky for me and this was only one stanza that rhymed which threw me off. The language was somewhat simple and I think you could have take this poem to a whole nother place with your words but it was simple. All in all good job. *4/5*

Very good discription,
sad, but senseair, i liked it a lot,
awsome job :)