I know it's love

by barbara   Mar 1, 2008


The first time we met his eyes took my soul
something made me want him for mine
around him i wasn't empty he made me whole
and his words flowed from his lips like fine wine

each time he spoke at his mouth i would stare
in awe of it's shape and the truth it beheld
in his arms i felt free and without a care
almost immediately he made my heart meld

we talked and grew closer and then one day
he kissed me and it came as a surprise
me knees grew weak and i drifted away
his kiss was to bring my demise

from that point forward i had no doubt in my mind
his kiss told me all that i needed to know
it confirmed my thoughts(he's so loving and kind)
it's so wonder that i love him so

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  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    I liked it, it has so much feeling in it. Love the details and descriptions. Keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Very sweet, especially the part about kiss. very emotional and warm-hearted.
    just a note:
    stanza 2, line 4: is it "melt"?
    stanza 3, line 3: is it "my knees"?
    anyways, these are just misprints and it doesn't matter.
    the poem left such a nice feeling in my heart! i have a lot of talent:)