by vintage darling Mar 1, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
So you've lost the words, the words to say |
by Alexander
I must admit that this poem was a breath taking piece with magnificent word choice. Sadly i must agree with Wallace though when he says there are a few parts that just seem to lack in emotion. All together it is a wonderful piece with a wonderful message that many can relate to. Keep up the good work. 4/5 |
by withlove
I really like this poem |
by Wallace
A nice poem, but the flow was off most times and it lacked real passion and imagery. The lines were worded ok but the poem just didnt seem satisfying. I would have to give it 4/5 |