Awwwwwwwies... this is really good expressing!

Its sad how people have to go in a seperate direction but if he loves you he will always come back. Great poem=)

AWW that is expressing real emotion i love it its amazing

Nice expression - keep up the good writes and never let the clock dictate the time you spend on a poem. some words like paint never really dry so you can always go back and change them if you wish.