Dont give up...

by Carissa   May 20, 2004


What are you supposed to do?
When everyone leaves it up to you...
You tell him not to do it
You try and try but nothings working...
"Don't give up! Keep Going!"
how can you say that?
When you wanna give up yourself...
You push and hold back the tears
Your eyes are terrified with fear
What if he doesn't listen?!?
it'll be all your fault when he's gone...
You brush that thought to the back of your mind
He finally says he promises he wont...
But now you lie in your bed thinking
starring up at the ceiling
Your so exhausted but you cant shut your eyes
So you wait until the sunrises
to see if he's still alive...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin

    wow i really feel this poem, i felt alot of emotion being put into this poem, i felt the hopelessness, and the hope sort of coming together, i really like the way it was written too, keep up the grat work!

    BTW, if you have a chance maybe you could check out some of my poems, i think you might like them

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