I adore this. This poem hits close to home with me, and while reading this poem it really hit my heart.

"Do I talk too fast or not enough?
Am I too gently or too tough?"
^ "gently" should be gentle. (:
These have to be my favorite two lines -- they were beautifully written, and I know that I can relate to this feeling, because I'm the type of person who overanalyzes everything. Haha. (:

Phenominal job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5
- Stephanie <33

I know exactly how this feels. I even wrote a poem on it myself, that's similar to this one.

"Do I talk too fast or not enough?
Am I too gentle or too tough?"

In mine I said,
"Do you really like me? Am I coming on to strong?
Or should I do more to show you I that I really do care?"

I guess great minds think alike =) Great job!