The way you make me feel!

by XxWorthlessxX   Mar 2, 2008


I go to sleep and think of you,
wondering if i was without you, what I'd do.
i wish i could hold your hand everyday,
while these are the words I'd say.
I love you with all my heart,
I did right from the start.
without you my life would come to an end,
cause you my love, are my dearest friend.
when i said i loved you, i was being honest,
and i will love you forever just like i promised.
i could not imagine my life without you by my side,
if this day we part comes, i know i could say i cried.
i want it to be you i go through things, thick and thin,
its your touch i want to feel deep within.
when you say I love you, oh the feelings that i get,
those are the feelings that no matter what, i will not forget.
i want you to know ill do whatever it takes,
to make sure i have not made any mistakes.
baby, i wanna be the only girl for you,
now that would be a dream come true.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shotput Girl

    I totally disagree with eehcuhhz. I liked this poem. I can relate to this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by eehcuhhhz

    I'll go with the good first,
    I really like your punctuation.
    It seems mature for someone your age.

    The bad,
    I honestly don't like this poem.
    It's too cliched.
    The best to cure cliched poems
    Are none too cliched words.

    But you used words that everyone else used
    I dunno.

    Sorry.
    I hope you don't take this personally.
    I'm just a really, really hard grader.