Comments : THE END OF LOVE !!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    The poem was great... Just like a sorrowful lullaby ! drawing a sad end to what seemed to be an everlasting love and trend.. there are few mistakes but all in all it was great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    The poem was great
    and you know why ?
    cause i can feel you
    and u used some words that realy showed that your honest in what r you writing
    it's amazing .... go on and on ...

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    No love can never end!!!!!!!!!!!!

    moucha DON'T LET IT END!

    don't u dare!

    nice ending :]

    5/5