ANOTHER DAY LOVE!!

by Mister 47   Mar 2, 2008


Your eyes speak to me in a way

that is more bright that the light of day

i can not move, i am staring

like my soul has been taken away

you smile cover the way

the sorrow i feel is away

to my heart the melting reach

the think wall i build ,are breached

in the day i dream of you

walking in street , i am wondering who

who is with you , what make you sad

my love , i worry that you get mad

in nights i wake in a dream

i try to touch you , you scatter like steam

why this hurt my heart feel

i can not more , i bow i kneel

at the end folks , love not a lie

a smile a whisper , a lovely butterfly

a look a touch a caring word

this is what it is build on , this world

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Nice job the first stanza doesn't ryme so well,
    but the rest of the poem rymes great.

    i just don't know how you'd be able to sing this ryming every word.... post a video sometime so i can see lol :]

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very beautiful,
    defanitly a 5/5!!!

    -mandy