The End

by Jodie Phillips   Mar 2, 2008


From this, I want out
For you to realize, i will scream and shout.
Its over without a doubt
All thanks to you, happy now.
You have destroyed everything we were about
I feel dazed like I'm floating in the clouds
constantly asking myself why, and how?
You could let this happen your so foul
Of yourself, i hope your proud.

What goes around comes around.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was both beautiful and sad,
    haven't read your poems in a while,
    and this one is so well written and so
    amazingly put. Defanitly a 5/5.
    Maybe, if you had the time, you could
    read some of my poems, again awsome job!

    -mandy <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Thats very nice, emotions are expressed well, i enjoyed it, nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Just blew away your poems are just amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    Such raw emotion. You've definitely captured the misery, hurt and confusion of a broken relationship. I hope life is a little more peaceful now.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, wonderful written and nice flow. i love it alot and i can feel your pain.

    i hope things are better now

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