by Mr. Darcy Mar 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Wow so beautiful written. The wording and everything so well tuned. I enjoyed reading. |
by Ben Pickard
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What an uplifting piece and a RYHME!!! A new I would find one from you, Michael. |
by Sylvia
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Your words flow so well, as if there was no effort on your part to write them, that you just thought them and they could not wait to get to the page. I know this does not make sense but I don't know anyother way to say what I mean, effortless would sum it up. If this is any indication of how you write, I am in for a treat when I read your other poetry. Thank you for such beautiful words. |
by Silent Angel
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Fantastic Poem. I know its your first on the site, i think its your first, haha, but it is fantastic. Great Job! |
by Mia
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Damn. WOw. you are too good. your poems make me enjoy life a tiny bit more. |