Omg...I'm so wow'd By this poem..Honestly! It's Wonderful! The Ryhming..The Vivid Images I was given..All of it was so clear in my head. I'm very glad you posted this. It was wonderful. I believe You Have A Talent.
Keep It Up
5/5

-Ally

Wowwww. This is amazing! You did such an excellent job with the flow and rhyming. wow, i'm speechless.. again. amazing, amazing, amazing!! 5/5

RubberDuckiex3

Wow, this piece was so wonderful.keep up the good work.5/5

*harlea

Great poem

Your words are magic in each poem I read, I must say you are very talented .
This one was beautifully done, such an easy read.
Another Darcy masterpiece

Awesome Poem! One of the best i've read in a long time! Definantly going to be added to my favs list! Great Job... Keep it up!

Damn. WOw. you are too good. your poems make me enjoy life a tiny bit more.

Fantastic Poem. I know its your first on the site, i think its your first, haha, but it is fantastic. Great Job!
Silent Angel

Your words flow so well, as if there was no effort on your part to write them, that you just thought them and they could not wait to get to the page. I know this does not make sense but I don't know anyother way to say what I mean, effortless would sum it up. If this is any indication of how you write, I am in for a treat when I read your other poetry. Thank you for such beautiful words.

What an uplifting piece and a RYHME!!! A new I would find one from you, Michael.
Either way, whatever you write, it is natural and beautifully done. Wonderful
All the best,
Ben

Wow so beautiful written. The wording and everything so well tuned. I enjoyed reading.
Add to my favorite.