She Can't Take It Anymore.

by xxLivxx   Mar 2, 2008


She sighs,
the whole world is crashing down
piece by piece it falls upon the ground.

She's tired,
of dealing with all this pain
she wants to see something other then rain.

She's sad,
but she tries and tries to smile
but they've all been fake for awhile.

She hopes,
that things will be OK
but she's tired of fighting every day.

She wants,
to just feel happy for once in her life
no more running to that glistening knife.

She cares,
but things now seem to mean a lot less
like the heart that's bleeding in her chest.

She cries,
but no one's around to hear
she knows she's alone; her greatest fear.

She loves,
but she really doesn't know why
because everything she loves always says goodbye.

She's scared,
she can feel herself dim from sight
there seems to be nothing left tonight.

She's dead,
her blood runs onto the floor
she just couldn't take it anymore...

Please rate.
and comment.
or whatever.
I am feeling really, really down.

i can't do this anymore :'-(

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  • 16 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    Amazing poem. it really got my attention and i can really relate to it. its really an amazing poem. i'm also here if you need anyone to talk to

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Beautiful poem.It's very emotional and I can really relate.You managed to the explain the emotions and hold the reader's attention.Don't worry,everything will get better and if you need anyone to talk to about anything,just PM me.Anyway amazing poem.
    Keep writing,
    Rado