The Fall Of Humpty Dumpty

by Gem   Mar 2, 2008


(Author's note - I've not been a very active member recently due to personal problems. So here's an attempt at smiling)

Xx The Fall Of Humpty Dumpty xX

Everyone knows the nursery rhyme
Of Humpty Dumpty and his wall
But one thing just doesn't make sense
Why would he suddenly fall?

You see, old Humpty had good balance
It was a very well known fact
He used to be a tight rope walker
And he never fell off that

There's no way he could have fell
Not even with a windy gust
There's only one explanation
Humpty Dumpty was obviously pushed!

*Gem*
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  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    AHAHAH I JUST HAVE TO COMMENT Again babe! this poem was so cool tome cause it just iz. ya digg!?

    lol. I WANT TO READ THIS TO MY LITTLE K- PRE STUDENTS THEY WILL LOVE IT GEM YOU GOT DANGEROUS TALENT NO LIE, I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE A POEM FOR YOUR VOWEL ON YOUR WEDDING DAY.... YOUR BOYFRIEND SOON TO BE HUSBAND WILL LOVE IT. =]

    HEHEEH. I RATE IT AGAIN. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Hehe... it is funny
    I hope you solve those personal problems

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is really funny! Brings a big smile to my face! Very humorous! Well written Gem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awwww Gem how i missed your poems :) another fantastic poem, and plz try to smile :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I loved it! I very, very, very rarely give out 5/5s, but this was brilliant, and so I had to. I loved the spin of a well known story, and it was done is such a playful, relaxed and yet overdramatic way. You had great rhythm, great ryhmes, a great story and great words...this piece was/is fantastic!

    Brad

    P.S. I'll be honest with you, I was expecting to dislike your piece because you're a very decorated member, which in my experience, doesn't always mean you're a good writer, and usually means you just ass kiss everyone so everyone votes you highly, but I can see you've clearly got talent and I sincerely apologise. Though I still haven't ruled out that you're a ass kisser, lol.

    P.P.S. Sorry your personal life itsn't going great, believe me, I know how that feels, I've been going through the same thing, since I was 12. Good luck though. I hope you're life goes better than mine...it can't get much worse, lol.

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