Lol Gem...so good to have you back!!! Hope all is well.....

this is a cute take on the old nursery rhyme favorite!

Hope everything turns out okay! Yes this was cute, it did get a smile from me! Again I wish everything turns out. 5/5

Wecome back Gem we have missed you :)
Very cute piece and it did bring a smile.
Love Cindy

Welcome back Gem!!.. good to have ya back!.. Quite enjoyed this little piece from you, a very lighthearted poem that brought a smile to this face.. well done!

LOL ! I love that take on humpty dumpy! very original and so funny! Glad to see you posting girly!
Charisma*

WOW!!! I never thought about it...but how do you just FALL OFF of a wall? HAHAHAHA NICE!!! I LOVE THIS!!! And it totally made me smile!!!!!!! Hope all is well...take care

Ahahaah! yeha i think he was murderd too..

poor egg. at least he is a legend in every kids bed time story...

you made me smile =]

nice 10/10

Cute poem, lol i love nursery rythms even if they are a bit weird and this was very well written and cute,, made me smile

----tara

I loved it! I very, very, very rarely give out 5/5s, but this was brilliant, and so I had to. I loved the spin of a well known story, and it was done is such a playful, relaxed and yet overdramatic way. You had great rhythm, great ryhmes, a great story and great words...this piece was/is fantastic!

Brad

P.S. I'll be honest with you, I was expecting to dislike your piece because you're a very decorated member, which in my experience, doesn't always mean you're a good writer, and usually means you just ass kiss everyone so everyone votes you highly, but I can see you've clearly got talent and I sincerely apologise. Though I still haven't ruled out that you're a ass kisser, lol.

P.P.S. Sorry your personal life itsn't going great, believe me, I know how that feels, I've been going through the same thing, since I was 12. Good luck though. I hope you're life goes better than mine...it can't get much worse, lol.

Awwww Gem how i missed your poems :) another fantastic poem, and plz try to smile :)

This is really funny! Brings a big smile to my face! Very humorous! Well written Gem!

Hehe... it is funny
I hope you solve those personal problems

AHAHAH I JUST HAVE TO COMMENT Again babe! this poem was so cool tome cause it just iz. ya digg!?

lol. I WANT TO READ THIS TO MY LITTLE K- PRE STUDENTS THEY WILL LOVE IT GEM YOU GOT DANGEROUS TALENT NO LIE, I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE A POEM FOR YOUR VOWEL ON YOUR WEDDING DAY.... YOUR BOYFRIEND SOON TO BE HUSBAND WILL LOVE IT. =]

HEHEEH. I RATE IT AGAIN. 5/5.