The Waiting War... .:||Forever, Forever...||:.

by unblue skye   Mar 2, 2008


The waiting war...
Eating up the brave men and women...
Emptiness in others hearts...
Like a hole in the ground...
Wonderful memories are all that is left...
Why do they go?
Why do they battle for the people that only abuse them?
Why do they let the war devour them?
Sleepless Zombies...
Given orders...
A gun in their hand...and a long forgotten...
Smile...
Fighting for their country...their family, their friends....
Hopelessly lost in explosions...
Hopelessly lost forever...
Sadness embraces the family... They hear the news...
"The waiting war took them...." Forever, forever...
The waiting war took them from the battle they fought...
The Waiting War... Forever, Forever...

--**Skye~
(we all no wut happens in the war....)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Incredible, makes be want to cry...

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenxBruised

    I likey skye (Its mint-kailin)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    I believe your poems would have more emphasis if they had a specific beat or rhythm

  • 16 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Awesome job. I liked it. keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Trully amazing poem!!! so sweet of u to write it! yea it sad that loved onez gotta go out to war but, hey, some1's gotta do it rite? (no offence) my dad iz one of those peepz that do that. anyhowz! great poem!! 5/5!!
    xoxo
    -d^^

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