Comments : The Waiting War... .:||Forever, Forever...||:.

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Ths is acually verrrry good sissy, i love it man!!! It deserves more than a 5 but what the heck thats the highest i can give. Keep up the good writing sissy ^_^

    Loveeee you<3

    SissyxRose

    CourtneyxHolland

    X-x-o-O-0-o-x-X

  • 16 years ago

    by melissa

    This is amazing, i love it

    5/5 keep up the great writinig =D

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Trully amazing poem!!! so sweet of u to write it! yea it sad that loved onez gotta go out to war but, hey, some1's gotta do it rite? (no offence) my dad iz one of those peepz that do that. anyhowz! great poem!! 5/5!!
    xoxo
    -d^^

  • 16 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Awesome job. I liked it. keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    I believe your poems would have more emphasis if they had a specific beat or rhythm

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenxBruised

    I likey skye (Its mint-kailin)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Incredible, makes be want to cry...