I agree - so we must unbury our heads and pull together to make a change where we can.. it can be done. peace

Another enjoyable read. You captivated my attention.

I think this poem is great
Keep up the writing

Danielle
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I really enjoyed this. Words heartfelt and totally meaningful. So much pain in the world you would think in the 21st century we would have sorted it out by now XX

I loved it.
Its precision.
The quick wordedness maintained teh readers attention and got the point across.
So much truth to it :)
Keep it up
Kitty

This poem is amazing!! i love the topic and believe in its contents!! this is something people need to hear about!! well done!!

I adored the last stanza.

The whole poem is EXACTLY how I feel. I'm glad you sent this to me. We're causing too much descruction where all it takes is simple changes to make a huge difference...but no one cares.

Five out of five.