Great Things You Find

by Mister 47   Mar 2, 2008


Great things you can find
when you look inside your mind !
a great person you will be
all that money and those degrees

but the truth , i say not shame
and please don't point to me your blame
i know inside one truth
better to know it in youth

that all your do , is actually a part
and simply , measured by the size of your heart
and the kindness you will hold as credit
that is what in the need you'll merit

believe what i say without these all
without pillars your building will fall
like you build your house on sand
with the waves it fell , and end

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    I know you feel all your poems should ryme but sometimes if you make it ryme each line, it doesn't make sense. How about trying a different ryme scheme? maybe every other line?

    you can tell stories easier that way.

    but good job, 5/5