Comments : Flawed Masquerade

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow... this poem was just totally amazing, Kris. The title was so unique, and the poem itself just captured my attention. I loved it, and I can feel your pain. You made all of the emotions totally clear in this piece and it's definitely relateable. Great job, girl! I love you, keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I felt that way 2, wanting, and not wanting something at the same time...it's really good..^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow a very very wonderful poem... keep writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Amazing poem, great write. 5/5.
    sad, but great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    Dat was really gud ur an amazin writer u shud keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Powerfull.....so powerfull....this was absolutly beyond my words...I'm trying to muster a compliment but nothing seems to do this poem justice.....this was......amazing...the absolute sadness and beauty of this piece is simply.......devine...

    -mello193-

  • 16 years ago

    by SomethingxxNew

    Wow, thats amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    An inner voice

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    Wow your a great writer keep it up i loved it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Good

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Very Good.
    The mask thing about it crumbling and revealving weakness i deff know what your talking about there

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

    -xx-

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Very touching words ,excellent poem .
    i really like it . great work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Brilliant write...

    Frightened of reaching out,
    And finding only empty air,
    Finally admitting I need help,
    Then realizing no one's there.

    loved this part...its beautiful n hearfelt...

    great work..

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    WoW,
    Great write, my favorite passage is this one.

    Frightened of reaching out,
    And finding only empty air,
    Finally admitting I need help,
    Then realizing no one's there.

    Finding inner strength, Greate read 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Ofcourse youv'e already been told how amazing this poem is with all of the previous comments but i would just like to add that out of the many poems iv'e read with the same meaning..yours unlike the the others held more depth and emotion!
    I really enjoyed reading this poem
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, the rhyme scheme was aweome and i really love the content of this poem. Flowed well, brilliantly written and unique at some part. really well worded one. How I adore this stanza:

    Another tear slowly forming,
    Slipping silently down my cheek,
    My mask of strength crumbling,
    Revealing that I'm weak.

    Absolutely 5/5!!! Damn I hate it, it should have been in the contest nomination... It's worth reading.. But it's not available!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOw! You wrote this so well. Each word was overflowing with pain and sorrow. The poem was crying from such sorrowfulness, I felt it. Fine writer!

    ^^5/5^^

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  • 16 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    Your words are tremendously powerful sweetheart.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow! this poem was A-MA-ZING! I loved it so much. This was so well written and the flow added to it's bliss.

    Frightened of reaching out,
    And finding only empty air,
    Finally admitting I need help,
    Then realizing no one's there.

    ^^this stanza was my favorite. It caught my attention. Superb job keep it up. 5/5
    ~Forever Broken