by Kayla
Wow... this poem was just totally amazing, Kris. The title was so unique, and the poem itself just captured my attention. I loved it, and I can feel your pain. You made all of the emotions totally clear in this piece and it's definitely relateable. Great job, girl! I love you, keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 |
I felt that way 2, wanting, and not wanting something at the same time...it's really good..^^ |
by Sarah
Wow a very very wonderful poem... keep writing 5/5 |
by Melly
Amazing poem, great write. 5/5. |
Dat was really gud ur an amazin writer u shud keep it up! |
by Mello193
Powerfull.....so powerfull....this was absolutly beyond my words...I'm trying to muster a compliment but nothing seems to do this poem justice.....this was......amazing...the absolute sadness and beauty of this piece is simply.......devine... |
Wow, thats amazing. |
by Mike Wilburn
An inner voice |
by Krista
Wow your a great writer keep it up i loved it!!!! |
Good |
by Amber
Very Good. |
by Domino0792
Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that! |
by hopefulsmile
Very touching words ,excellent poem . |
by Lonely Rider
Brilliant write... |
by JEFF
WoW, |
by Nobodys Hero
Ofcourse youv'e already been told how amazing this poem is with all of the previous comments but i would just like to add that out of the many poems iv'e read with the same meaning..yours unlike the the others held more depth and emotion! |
Wow, the rhyme scheme was aweome and i really love the content of this poem. Flowed well, brilliantly written and unique at some part. really well worded one. How I adore this stanza: |
by Sarah
WOw! You wrote this so well. Each word was overflowing with pain and sorrow. The poem was crying from such sorrowfulness, I felt it. Fine writer! |
Your words are tremendously powerful sweetheart. |
Wow! this poem was A-MA-ZING! I loved it so much. This was so well written and the flow added to it's bliss. |