Wow... this poem was just totally amazing, Kris. The title was so unique, and the poem itself just captured my attention. I loved it, and I can feel your pain. You made all of the emotions totally clear in this piece and it's definitely relateable. Great job, girl! I love you, keep it up. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I felt that way 2, wanting, and not wanting something at the same time...it's really good..^^

Wow a very very wonderful poem... keep writing 5/5

Amazing poem, great write. 5/5.
sad, but great job.

Dat was really gud ur an amazin writer u shud keep it up!

Powerfull.....so powerfull....this was absolutly beyond my words...I'm trying to muster a compliment but nothing seems to do this poem justice.....this was......amazing...the absolute sadness and beauty of this piece is simply.......devine...

-mello193-

Wow, thats amazing.

An inner voice

Wow your a great writer keep it up i loved it!!!!

Good

Very Good.
The mask thing about it crumbling and revealving weakness i deff know what your talking about there

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

-xx-

5/5

Very touching words ,excellent poem .
i really like it . great work. 5/5

Brilliant write...

Frightened of reaching out,
And finding only empty air,
Finally admitting I need help,
Then realizing no one's there.

loved this part...its beautiful n hearfelt...

great work..

WoW,
Great write, my favorite passage is this one.

Frightened of reaching out,
And finding only empty air,
Finally admitting I need help,
Then realizing no one's there.

Finding inner strength, Greate read 5/5

Ofcourse youv'e already been told how amazing this poem is with all of the previous comments but i would just like to add that out of the many poems iv'e read with the same meaning..yours unlike the the others held more depth and emotion!
I really enjoyed reading this poem
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Wow, the rhyme scheme was aweome and i really love the content of this poem. Flowed well, brilliantly written and unique at some part. really well worded one. How I adore this stanza:

Another tear slowly forming,
Slipping silently down my cheek,
My mask of strength crumbling,
Revealing that I'm weak.

Absolutely 5/5!!! Damn I hate it, it should have been in the contest nomination... It's worth reading.. But it's not available!!!

WOw! You wrote this so well. Each word was overflowing with pain and sorrow. The poem was crying from such sorrowfulness, I felt it. Fine writer!

^^5/5^^

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Your words are tremendously powerful sweetheart.
5/5

Wow! this poem was A-MA-ZING! I loved it so much. This was so well written and the flow added to it's bliss.

Frightened of reaching out,
And finding only empty air,
Finally admitting I need help,
Then realizing no one's there.

^^this stanza was my favorite. It caught my attention. Superb job keep it up. 5/5
~Forever Broken