by xoxShorteexox Mar 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wrote this sometime in January or February, I don't know whether I'm going to make it lyrics or keep it in poetic form. |
I think that you should put it in lyric form. It would sound good as a song. i was reading it and putting it to music in my mind the whole time. There were parts where I thought that the flow could've been better, but it was minor things. I loved it. 5/5 |