How can I repay that love

by Ahmed Ismail   Mar 3, 2008


Every day I lie-down and cry
Missing you and it feels as if every day I die
Pictures of you all around my place
Every time I close my eyes I only see your pretty face
I always miss you as time goes on
When you talk to me something is different in your tone
Makes me think about how lucky I am
Honestly I am the luckiest man
I feel like I know you from before
And when I am with you I lose control
My heart takes over my mind
Have you ever been told that you are one of a kind?
How can I repay that love???
How can I repay that love???

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  • 16 years ago

    by TheRedWomanAndherBagofLife

    Its a great poem however,,as dey said it doesnt have 2 rhyme..but have to go with the flow...i cant feel the enerrgy..more feelings into ur writting would be good...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ahmed Ismail

    Its not about rhyming its about feelings, rhyming is only there to make it look good, rhyming is not necessary in writing poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Ahmed Ismail

    Its not about rhyming its about feelings, rhyming is only there to make it look good, rhyming is not necessary in writing poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I admire your try i thunk you should wrok more on composition and rhyme

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